Comments for Baelavay http://www.baelavay.com/wordpress My works are my diary. Wed, 21 Jul 2010 10:28:37 +0200 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 Comment on Scorching forms and social welcome by Baelavay http://www.baelavay.com/wordpress/?p=629&cpage=1#comment-4618 Baelavay Wed, 21 Jul 2010 10:28:37 +0000 http://www.baelavay.com/wordpress/?p=629#comment-4618 Alright, thanks! Maybe I should hire you for translations ;) Alright, thanks! Maybe I should hire you for translations ;)

]]> Comment on Scorching forms and social welcome by Jim Panzee http://www.baelavay.com/wordpress/?p=629&cpage=1#comment-4617 Jim Panzee Wed, 21 Jul 2010 00:43:26 +0000 http://www.baelavay.com/wordpress/?p=629#comment-4617 You should work on your English skills, maybe read some English books or something. Your style just sounds like those translations which you get by using Google translate (although they're pretty good actually). It seems to me as if you'd translate your German sentences word for word into the English language. For example the use of the word focus is pretty wrong. Weeks can't be focused. Persons are focused. Another mistake I spotted is use of the word "whose" as before a page is not a person so you can't use whose in this case. The right word to use is "which". Although the word "finish" is not wrong but in your everyday life you would use "end" of course. I also found a slight grammar mistake as well. After "did" you have to use the infinitive. Anyway, keep up the good work! Jim. You should work on your English skills, maybe read some English books or something.
Your style just sounds like those translations which you get by using Google translate (although they’re pretty good actually).
It seems to me as if you’d translate your German sentences word for word into the English language.
For example the use of the word focus is pretty wrong. Weeks can’t be focused. Persons are focused.
Another mistake I spotted is use of the word “whose” as before a page is not a person so you can’t use whose in this case. The right word to use is “which”.
Although the word “finish” is not wrong but in your everyday life you would use “end” of course.
I also found a slight grammar mistake as well. After “did” you have to use the infinitive.

Anyway, keep up the good work!

Jim.

]]> Comment on Gamer Converter Vanaduris by StarLite Moon http://www.baelavay.com/wordpress/?page_id=19&cpage=1#comment-3589 StarLite Moon Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:36:31 +0000 http://www.baelavay.com/wordpress/?page_id=19#comment-3589 Hey there I enjoyed playing Gamer Converter Vanaduris very much. The game play was so smooth. I liked the graphics style. I'm not sure if I finished the game or not, last I remember I fell through a hole and ended up back in the character's bedroom where the game seemed to start all over again. But I really did enjoy this game. Looking forward to playing more by Baelavay Hey there

I enjoyed playing Gamer Converter Vanaduris very much. The game play was so smooth. I liked the graphics style.

I’m not sure if I finished the game or not, last I remember I fell through a hole and ended up back in the character’s bedroom where the game seemed to start all over again. But I really did enjoy this game. Looking forward to playing more by Baelavay

]]> Comment on Coming along with it somehow by StarLite Moon http://www.baelavay.com/wordpress/?p=263&cpage=1#comment-3588 StarLite Moon Mon, 09 Nov 2009 00:25:45 +0000 http://www.baelavay.com/?p=263#comment-3588 Hey Baelavay Great video. Germany looks like such a beautiful country. I would love to visit there sometime. Looks like you guys had a good time. Love the music. Cheers Hey Baelavay

Great video. Germany looks like such a beautiful country. I would love to visit there sometime. Looks like you guys had a good time. Love the music. Cheers

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